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Wow that's a lot of world building. I can't wait to see how it all comes together.

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Jan 23, 2022Liked by Zach J. Payne

Pretty cool Zach. Ready to read it!

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Jan 24, 2022Liked by Zach J. Payne

Hi Zach.

This sounds great ... a major undertaking!

Just a thought.... A small detail. I think the use of 'majesty' to address a monarch was introduced with Henry VIII, previously they had been addressed as 'grace'. In other words, the mediaeval king, as 'primus inter pares' was a recipient of God's beneficence rather than its source. I think that's right, but check it out anyway.

Take care. S

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That's amazing, Zach. I like how you came up with it all. I look forward to seeing how it all works out for you. I can't wait to watch the next episode of The Serial Killers.

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